Tuesday, August 6, 2013
creative writing
There was a man named Sam. He is living with his sister, his mother, and his father. His family is poor. So Sam works for company, and he is a hard working man. One day morning, Sam had a nightmare, and he was late to work. He was trying to stand up, but he couldn't. So, Sam looked at his body. His body had changed into a bug! He had transformed into a giant insect. When he moved, It made a big sound. His family was
surprised, and they all ran in to Sam's room. When his door opened, the family was astonished by his appearance. He looked very disgusting, so all of the family members ran away. Nobody wanted to see him, and everyone hated him, and he was fired from his company.
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Your story is somewhat similar to Kafka's "Metamorphosis". Did you write your story based on this novel? Anyway, the story was interesting, but you could have elaborated more on how Sam felt and how all the other family members thought about Sam. That way, your story could have been much better.
ReplyDeleteIt was very calm story^^
ReplyDeleteIt is a very SF and creative story. I think your creative writing is better than others because It is creative. However, I think your story is little similar to SF books.
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